Essay feedback

The essay lacks textual support, as well as decent word choice. There is an attempt at trying to use parallel events but it didn’t follow through.  As well, I used the wrong pivotal moment completely which means I didn’t even answer the prompt in any way, shape, or form. The introduction was impeccably weak as well as a conclusion that was basically non-existent.   In the end the essay in its entirety deserves a three at most mainly because to get a five you have to at least answer the prompt and I didn’t even grasp that concept. If I was to redo the essay I would for one, pick the right moment, and second use textual support. Honestly I feel like I need help on everything!